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First, it had big, uninviting blocks of text. Second, it didn't put the benefits front and center. Third, the writing style was dry and academic. After I got hold of it, this flier was used to successfully promote a number of these breakfasts.
When I was first asked to rewrite this flier, it suffered from a number of common copywriting problems. |
Writing Samples Copywriting Before & After: Strategic Partner Mastery Group flier Scroll down to see what this flier looked like before I got a hold of it... After
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